Outline
Thesis statement
Teachers whose character works for suppressing bullying can contribute to the extermination of bullying.
Formal outline
Ⅰ. Introduction
A. Background information
B. Thesis statement
Ⅱ. What is bullying?
A. Definition
B. Statistics
C. Effects of bullying on children
1. Bully
2. Victim
3. Observer
Ⅲ. How is teacher’s character connected with bullying?
A. PM theory
B. Connection between teacher's attitude and bullying
Ⅳ. Conclusion
In the last class, Ken advised me that I could make some parts independent as one section, so I decided to write about bullying in section Ⅱ (this part was at first included in section Ⅰ. Introduction).
However, I do not do so in some
other parts such as Ⅲ-A. PM theory and Ⅲ-B. Connection between teacher's attitude and bullying because I want to explain Ⅲ-B by using Ⅲ-A, so I thought these two parts should be in one section.
Of course, this outline is still open for discussion, which will almost 100 percent be changed later. In addition, I have not introduced some advices yet for some reasons which my classmates gave me. Therefore I want you and Ken to look at my outline, and give me advices again.
Hi Aoi,
返信削除Thanks for your excellent post on Shackleton's optimism, and actually there were times in which he did need to exert his authority as we saw in the movie. For the most part, though, he tried to be as equal as possible, and as self-sacrificing.
As for your outline, to me it looks fine. Very sensible. Change as you need to but I see no problems with what you have now.
Ken